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Post by alexholder on Mar 3, 2009 22:40:44 GMT -5
Imagine yourself sitting home and your "parents" walk in the room, they tell you they need to talk to you, they tell you that you were adopted. What would your first reaction be? Why were you put up for adoption? Where are your real parents? Are they alive? So many things could be going through your head. While putting children up for adoption the biological parents can request for their children to never be able to contact them or find their recent location. Children should be able to know where they came from. Many people watch those movies where the child get's adopted and when they get older they find their biological parents. It's not that easy. There's many diffrent papers and things you have to go through. The biggest thing is the consent of the parent to see their child in a later date, like when they are older. This is unfair and wrong. It's not as if the older child will go and live with the biological parent. Most children want to know where they came from. Wouldn't you? Adobtion is a big factor in America. On average 120,00 children are adobted in America alone. This is a factor that needs dto be reached. Children should be able to meet their biological parents without consent. It's the right thing to do. Just putting yourself in their place, your heart would tell you the answer.
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Post by barryrubino on Mar 8, 2009 0:37:02 GMT -5
I agree with your argument. These children should be able to see and meet their biological parents. What if the child begins to question the parents why he or she was put up for adoption? How would you prevent a fight from errupting? Your introduction is strong, however you should back up your argument with statistics. Your body is the strongest part. You back up your thoughts and have a good argument. You seem to be very interested in this topic which will motivate you to find support that kids should be able to see their biological parents.When your speech is complete it will make others want to agree with you and go out to take action. Good luck.
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Post by maxdoelling on Mar 8, 2009 10:27:33 GMT -5
I agree that the kids should be able to see their parents. You should explain what could happen if the child really wants to see their parents and they are not allowed.
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Post by alexj on Mar 8, 2009 16:43:41 GMT -5
You have a good opening. I think that you have a good argument and valid points. You should just build on to what you already have. Make all of the points you already made and make them stronger. Good luck with your final draft
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