Michael Lippens Essay

[mlippens]

There are many good reasons to start the school day at an earlier time. One of the main reasons would be that all students would have more time after school. With the extra time in the afternoon, students would have more time to do their homework, participate in sports and clubs. Also it would give students more time for a part time job.
Students would also have to go to bed earlier since they will lose sleeping time in the morning. This I am sure would make would make many parents happy since many kids stay up too late.
If the school day was finished by 12:30, students could go home to eat lunch. The school could save money by not needing a cafeteria. This would save a lot of money for the school. The school could use the cafeteria space to build more classrooms.
In my case it would help me because then I could come home from school, eat lunch, do my homework and then I could do my tennis training.
I am sure that some people may not like this idea if they are not morning people but once they were done with school by 12:30, I am sure they would be happy having such a long time in the afternoon.

[JuliaMichael]

I don't disagree with your ideas, I think they are good. However, you have no explanations to back your ideas.

[annmarierusso]

I agree with you. There would be more time in the afternoon for kids to have a job and do homework and live their lives. I think we could still use the cafeteria for brekfeast instead of lunch. You need to back up what you are saying and add a little more to it. You have a litle grammar error. You have "This I am sure would make would make..." in the second paragraph. Otherwise everything else was good!

[kondracki]

This essay lacts research. You need to put more time in to researching facts to support your points. I agree with you that it would be nice to get out at 12:30 but what time wold you have to get up. Other than that i think if you expand on your essay it will be good.